While the short is a nice little dark tale, there are two things that keep the reader distracted.. The alignment margins are all off, character slugs, ... Read More
How on Earth did you pack so much into such a short script? The dialogue is exemplary, and is a character in itself.
You portray a terrifying image ... Read More
I really enjoyed reading this. It has a mysterious and lyrical quality that reminds me of Phantom of the Opera at times. I really liked the dialogue, ... Read More
Read this a few times now. i can't comment on format or screenplay technics. But here are my thoughts.
It's dark, enigmatic and bloody. I think the w ... Read More
The screenplay is certainly terrifying, both in concept and in the graphic description, and whilst there is characterisation we perhaps the inexplicab ... Read More
Interesting concept with lots of potential. However, the dialogue is pretentious and somewhat dated, and whilst I'm sure this was intended for effect, ... Read More
Hi there, so saw this floating around, here are my thoughts.
I always check out the person I am reviewing and the script properly. You are a stude ... Read More
Strong imagery, espcially the uniforms and the setting. Made me think of Eastern Europe.
and unsettling but I don't think I quite got it. Is it a ... Read More
5 star reviews are all well and good, but when they are from friends, who have only created an account to boost your competition entry. (This is obvio ... Read More
A nice gripping dark story, very enigmatic and intriguing! Great atmosphere and tension throughout to keep you gripped and wanting more. I'm a sucker ... Read More
Dark and surreal, with black black humour. Tarantino - meets - Nabokov - and - James - Wan - for - a - game - of - russian - roueltte - weird. Thought ... Read More
A very spooky atmosphere is created from the get-go, and much thought has gone into the tension and suspense building. It's a screenplay where I genui ... Read More
It left me thinking "what on earth is going on?" but it just so happens that I like it when art leaves me like that, I think that the characters were ... Read More
This is indeed an interesting script. The entire concept is incredibly gripping, and the ending (a homage to Mark Gaitaiss perhaps?) is sublime. Howev ... Read More