How on Earth did you pack so much into such a short script? The dialogue is exemplary, and is a character in itself.
You portray a terrifying image which is somehow claustrophobic even though it is set in an abandoned warehouse. I was going to try and figure out what your message was with this story, but I think the beauty of it is that it is so very ambiguous.
Highly recommended, well done!
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