Further

Hi William, just read Further, great beginning, great ending, but the middle was a bit of a mess, with a few technical issues. It went a bit wrong when the controller said "there is not enough fuel for the heat shields" as far as i know, heat shields don't use fuel, if you still want Leonid to head for the stars, let him bounce of the earths atmosphere and with not enough fuel for reentry let him head out towards the stars or fire him towards the moon, that way at the end, the boy could always be looking for the man in the moon?