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Happy Hound

Carmichael U.S.A.

All my work is Close Captioned for the hard-of-hearing.

I taught Written Communication in college. A proofreader for many years, I am currently an editor/proofreader for a very successful author.

Gender male

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- judithburzell
- 2012-05-15 20:04:07
- Thank you so much for taking the time to read "Murder in Malibu". It's going to need a lot of editing and I am sure it will see many revisions before I get to "The End". I am very appreciative of all the comments and reviews. I've never entered a competition before or written any fiction, but the story has been rattling around in my head for years and I had already done a lot of the background research. I want the historical context and physical descriptions to be as accurate as possible. As the revisions are posted and the story develops, I would love to hear more. Thanks again, Judy
- keithstorrier
- 2012-05-12 18:10:13
- Hi there, If you liked my previous script "Are Boyfriends Electric", feel free to read, rate and review my latest TV pilot script "The Weird World of M.R. James". Enjoy, Keith
- mimiwriter
- 2012-05-12 05:51:29
- Hi, I had informed Circalit about the problem, but they have not fixed the problem yet. Thanks for your try, I'll let you know as soon as the problem is fixed.
- jarlabrelk
- 2012-05-10 22:57:45
- Hi Wayne, Can you please give The Cedar Presse Pilot a looking over when you have some time; I will gladly pay in Lira, North Korean Won, Zimbabwe Dollars or any other dead/debased currency for your efforts(!)
- cocopel_1
- 2012-05-10 20:33:49
- Thanks, HH. What you said is helpful. I tried to keep the story as short as I possibly could, eliminating anything that would not add to the story. In doing so I might have left out too many things. You are not the first person to mention that, so I guess it's back to the drawing board. The hardest part is re-loading everything back into ciralit. I didn't mention, for example that she is the owner of the mine, but I am not sure if it was necessary besides the fact that she had more money than he. Other than the beginning as you mention, in your opinion, is the rest fairly self-explanatory? I personally really like this story and it was originally pages longer, explaining all about her father owning the mine, the fire that left her scarred and how Richard came into her life. Please advice me if you think I need to add more of that. Thank you! CI