Imagine Your Most Romantic Fantasy Realized

Dreamy idyll

by julienoble38

Character

Dialogue

Concept

Writing Style

Oh that was lovely, sweet as gelato, which I can't eat anymore, but just as delicious. As a forty something mum of five that was very tasty but i have to admit I kept expecting some sort of punchline, or twist. However, if you are happy with that then leave it as is! it's a sweet treat! Thank you!

Conversations

• 

  • wizzy

  • 2011-11-30 14:48:12
  • Thanks! I appreciate the comments. And tried to make some changes...I agree, the ending was a bit of a let down, so I added something.