Just re read death row. Much better! The part I think people were getting confused on makes a lot more sense. I know the story well now so I hope it is not because of that, but I am sure the part I struggled to engage with did make a lot more sense and was ALOT more obvious to what it was going on about.
Well done and good luck :)
You're quite a genius! I shared your work with a friend. It's a story I can't stop thinking about! Actually, I am going to enter another story called "His Daily Routine" probably tomorrow and that's the story i'm entering for the contest! Hope you read that. I can update you if you'd like :)
My entry for the Sci-Fi Short Story Competition is now complete. Wish me luck.
It is available here: http://www.circalit.com/michaelvank/projects/project_1330810783/
Please take the time to write me a review, as this forms part of the competition criteria, thanks.
Hello Yves (I hope that's your name)
Thanks for reading/writing, and no, I'm not a native Russian speaker...you guessed correctly. I speak German and English, with a bit of French and Spanish thrown in. I have a Russian friend, but he's not that great at spelling...apparently...
As for the shortness of my script...I really want for the whole thing to be on here, but for some strange reason it only shows the first page...any ideas...?
Will take a look at your writing now...
Take care, Harry